Add ethos and in text citations teachers cmments below *See the comments I left in your draft. You need to work on providing citations for the information you provide in this report. Right now, you are missing a lot of ethos in your report because you didn’t use very many in text citations***Your introduction needs to have a clear thesis statement that argues for increased awareness of the issue**You need citations for these sources. Any time you refer to information that is not your own, cite it.*Your final will need a conclusion which should include a summary of your main points and resources for your readers to get more information on organizations doing work to solve the issue follow  APA format for the references